He'd had mouthwash at the inn and could still feel
the ice blue carbon pinwheels spinning in his mouth.
oh my gosh! are you NEVER writing anything again?! my dad thinks it's fine that they took the cigarette out. my dad smokes--and is typical totally for tobacco and holds anti-smoking people (like me) in contempt... And when the postal service washed out jackson pollack's cigarette my dad was pretty mad... So I expected the same for this. ...But of course whatever I expect is never the case. So he said "for a children's book? that sounds, smart--it's a children's book after all." confusing. anyway I don't know what I think.
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